YouTube Link: https://youtu.be/pEAQFaaMvOs
Reflection
The feedback I received was positive. My peers stated that my first attempt at the elevator pitch was engaging and professional. I was told that the use of statistics demonstrated that there is an unmet need. In regards to criticism, I was advised to be more emotional when speaking about my product. I tend to be very straightforward so I hope to use more emotion for the second elevator pitch.
Change?
For the second elevator pitch, I changed some of the script to create a better flow of ideas. I also attempted to use more emotion and emphasis when speaking about my product.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your elevator pitch. First off, you did not rush and your ideas flowed very well which I think made it very easy to stay engaged. Also, your use of hand motions and props really helped. I think your most successful tactic was the use of statistics. The only thing I would work on would be to be more enthusiastic in your hook to make sure you grasp the attention of the audience. Overall, great job.
Hey,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job and improved a lot since the last elevator pitch that you did. I think the intro could be slightly more exciting so you can really grab the audience but I could really sense more emotion for the product you were promoting and definitely saw the effort to improve yourself in that area. Great job on the second elevator pitch.