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On my second elevator pitch, I received positive feedback regarding professionalism, emotion, and being able to communicate the purpose of my product efficiently. Regarding constructive criticism, I was advised to be more enthusiastic throughout the beginning of my pitch to increase engagement.Change?
For my third elevator pitch, I felt more confident and more comfortable presenting. This pitch took the least amount of time as most of it was already memorized. I feel as if though this pitch is better and more fluent than the other two, however, I still need to practice on showing more emotion when speaking.
I think that out of all of the people in our group, you are definitely the most comfortable with public speaking/presenting your pitch. Good job on that! It definitely seemed like you were talking to a real audience. It was clear that you practiced and you knew what you were talking about. I also like your use of props with the phone and the battery. Great job on this! I agree that you may want to show a little more emotion when speaking, but you still did very well.
ReplyDeleteWhats up Leeandrew! Its josh here and im with justin lmao bro that is a middle school lock not a phone prototype we were dying when you held it up hahahahhaha have a good night man
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